Taivon_Jovonnie

Posted Last year - 2/10/2009 @ 7:16 PM
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Taivon_Jovonnie

"Broken Without Fail"

I'm broken without fail 
As I am ready 
To blaze through the trail 
Of having to find 
The kind of life 
That I feel like I deserve 
And away from this dark 
And empty place 
That I used to call home 
As I am broken 
Without the failure 
Of what it is 
That I can't make out 
'Cause I am someone 
Who has filled 
My own head with 
Nothing but doubt 

I'm broken without fail 
And if you want 
You can follow my trail 
And walk with me 
To see what it is 
That I see 
With my own eyes 
As I'd see 
The shining sun rise 
As I am broken 
Without a book of advice 
Of how to make food 
Which includes rice 

I'm broken without fail 
'Cause I am able 
To walk down this trail 
As my heart 
Is about to set sail 
As you'd come along 
And together 
We'll sing a song 
About our long 
Summer days on the beach 
Walking down 
Underneath the hot sun 
As we'd be singing 
And having fun 

3 Comments so far...

By ek9stacy on 2/11/2009 5:28:00 AM
Beautiful work, props.

By cambodianthundersmom on 2/11/2009 7:24:00 AM
very nice work, it flows real smooth and it has a strength to it, cus sometimes we are stronger at our broken places:) *HUGS*

By xxxaznkhmergurl209 on 4/26/2009 8:38:00 PM
omg yu r so good at poem love it i think its sad nd romantic oh im T jux 2 let yu knoe well hi ttyl bye !

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