A tear in my Brain...allow the voices in

Last year - 10/30/2009 @ 11:57 AM

I received an invitation that had no return address. All it had inside were directions to places I once knew in the past.

There is an old barber shop my dad used to take me to when I was a kid. When I got there, the place was boarded up. The building caught fire some years ago and is now abandoned. The bums from behind the alley has made it their home.

My next location was a hospital. There was a room number. The same room my grandmother died in. The same place I stood in when I watched her take her last breath. The nurse, sitting in the other room was as useless as ever. Now, there is an empty bed there. Why am I here?

The third location, an empty lot. It was unfamiliar to me. From a distance, a dog was running toward me. I thought I was done for since the dog was mange and rabid looking. Its eyes were defeated. And most of all, it collapse just a few feet of me. The collar on the dog reads "Dig"  I guess that was the dog's name. Maybe?

So I pushed the dog aside and used a near-by scrap metal on the ground and started digging. I dug for nearly half an hour until I finally hit something solid. It was a jewelry box.

Inside, were more direction

This time...more ominous.

This time, it could mean....I am finally done for. 

 

 

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Last Updated: 11/13/2009 @ 10:18 AM

8 Comments so far...

Paradox
Paradox wrote
Last year - 10/30/2009 @ 11:59 AM
Wow.
LieLyingLiarLied
LieLyingLiarLied wrote
Last year - 10/30/2009 @ 12:00 PM
A TEAR IN THE BRAIN.....LETS TRUTH OUT AND LIES IN!!!!
pocahontas
pocahontas wrote
Last year - 10/30/2009 @ 12:06 PM
You write with so much imagery and depth. It totally captures my focus every time. Your words are so beautiful (when telling a story har har). Continue please! I want to read more. :) You + Quixotic = my fave bloggers. More! More! *faints*
sSilentxstarzZ
sSilentxstarzZ wrote
Last year - 10/30/2009 @ 3:39 PM
Roboto and Quixotic are amazing writers.They're very artistic.
Eneffex
Eneffex wrote
Last year - 10/30/2009 @ 12:08 PM
You had me until the dog collapsing part, that turned this into a comedy.
Roboto
Roboto wrote
Last year - 10/30/2009 @ 12:59 PM
Heh. It's just a touch of Truffaut's imagery. Things that are like ghost carrying a message.
VIB0L
VIB0L wrote
Last year - 10/30/2009 @ 5:10 PM
Nice work. I like it.
Roboto
Roboto wrote
Last year - 10/30/2009 @ 5:57 PM
Thanks Vibol =D
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